The Hourglass And The Clepsydra Comments

all hail the power of your imagination.

Nice and full of imagery, thanks for sharing.

This is truly beautiful.

A poem of high imagination and rich language with interesting ancient references.The last two lines are very beautiful.10.

Nice poem, it's like Funatastic atlantis discovery; p

Not only sand but celestial water to wash my dreams, I bow to the time and beauty, you nicely paint here, thank you!

Yes, The Hourglass with it's surrealism reminds me of a Salvador Dali painting: Good writes :)

this is a very nice poem....good flow...good words tooo..i like the poem...i enjoyed it truelly....please my new poems

I don't know what to say... But good job on this piece! Let me invite you to comment on one of my works as well. :)

Thanks for inviting to read this creative poems Matthew, you craft them well, if people play piano to hit the key perfectly, you done nicely to hit keyboard to create your beautiful poetry! ! _Unwritten SOul

great. has a poetic flow. message and tell me what else you have in store!

i really like your poem... Nice write. Aditi

amazing! ! ! ! hit me up