The Hotel Boy Comments

Dear poet never think '' i am helpless '' as you wrote.You did as you can with your words that sticks on all hearts those who read this, with your great message..revolution happens when millions thinks of a change.you can carry this message at least on mine heart..a poet always dreams a better world.you did this with your poem.thank you

In my humble opinion poetry is composed in diction of feelings rather than any yard stick of accuracy...this i must say is an eye-opener...this poem has a very loud voice for the high-ups... your hotel boy reminds me of Blake's Chimney sweeper! ! !

I like the idea behind the poem...can be improved further by taking care of grammar...

Really like this. A great poem. A good write.