Tuesday, April 20, 2010

The Hostile Brothers Comments

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Yonder, on the mountain summit,
Lies the castle wrapped in night;
In the valley gleam the sparkles
Struck from clashing swords in fight.
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Heinrich Heine
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Terry Craddock 28 November 2020

P2 A Fatal Feud Residue Of Fading Reasons questions errors creep in shadows wisdom walks wise in light... Inspired by the poem 'The Hostile Brothers', by the poet Heinrich Heine. Dedicated to the poet Henrich Heine.

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Terry Craddock 28 November 2020

P1 A Fatal Feud Residue Of Fading Reasons were they thinking with testosterone muscle not brain? upon their deaths did she mourn them indifferent or in pain? did she die a virgin virtuous or soon depart with another suitor? as for fallen two brothers fatal folly was it naught but life hate hate wasted?

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Terry Craddock 28 November 2020

Can An Anger Hate Feud Be Stopped? were Countess Laura's beaming glances young girl flirt glances? were they purity of heart a young girl's joy happy innocent glances? was Countess Laura enjoying ego attention or did she hate the feud? did she sincere attempt to dissuade two brothers from a moral deadly fight? Inspired by the poem 'The Hostile Brothers', by the poet Heinrich Heine. Dedicated to the poet Henrich Heine.

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P3 A Love Tempest Violent Left A Ruin Of Hate has dark time proved she was beloved worth fighting over? did brothers wonderer why women desire to be fought over? did she have a choice even want to evil desire be fought over? one wonders who of choice two brothers the beloved loved? did the brothers not think to ask her no in their vanity never! did she encourage conflict savouring a duel fought over her?

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P2 A Love Tempest Violent Left A Ruin Of Hate still a brother feud curse blood spilt taints a dreary valley dare thee to venture out to view fearful sights seen by night as midnight strikes brothers hate still renew a ghastly fight love a fairytale start became curse fly in ruin feud ointment?

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P1 A Love Tempest Violent Left A Ruin Of Hate river time must flow on stark wind stinging dust must go many centuries spent departed many new races lived died found a tomb yet still from witness yonder rocky summits frown those fate fallen castle moss-grown towers of gloom?

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P3 Love A Dream Nightmare Dance Of Death yet none cried warning stop beware ye savage warriors evil powers like a satanic hunger prowl this cursed night woe is a blood curse you sow ye stupid brothers? woe thy sow in anger hate into a peaceful ancestral valley thus is struck by each other's sweat swords tiring expiring a heart stopping deadly blow sink brothers stark pale dead?

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P2 Love A Dream Nightmare Dance Of Death both brothers vain to vain to seek her heart's inclining sought to kill competition draw sword let that decide wild desperate grows vile combat hear a death knell wait clashing strokes like thunder fly see a shadow sinister fate?

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P1 Love A Dream Nightmare Dance Of Death below mountain summit high where lies noble birthright their own home castle wrapped in poison darkest night two brothers fought their fatal deadliest mortal fight in the valley shadow where neither may again see light?

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P4 In An Animal Kingdom: Courtship Can Be A Deadly Fatal Dance dry kindling cauldron set were both brothers with equal intense passion thus set in motion was a viper hissing dance for a fair and noble dame who could win the fair one's favor win her for his own beloved bride? Inspired by the poem 'The Hostile Brothers', by the poet Heinrich Heine. Dedicated to the poet Henrich Heine.

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P3 In An Animal Kingdom: Courtship Can Be A Deadly Fatal Dance what dark deceit fly in bitter ointment could brew this festering stew it was passion inflamed by beauty Countess Laura's beaming glances it was her looks tempting irresistible which did this fatal feud inflame?

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P2 In An Animal Kingdom: Courtship Can Be A Deadly Fatal Dance hand against hand in violent ferocious rage burns a deadly hatred brand see a hellish diabolical hate burns in each fevered searing brother eye which ill-fated foolish blood kinsman brother if any will here fall to die what could be a festering cause to turn brother against brother suicidal?

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P1 In An Animal Kingdom: Courtship Can Be A Deadly Fatal Dance a chilling tale of brother against brother fought in evil darkness sight on a mountain summit a family castle is wrapped in brooding night in valley echo blows gleam sparkles struck by clashing swords in fight brothers in fury fierce wage bitter battle against a fire skyline spectral?

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P4 Murder 101: A Crime Scene At The First Recorded Murder perhaps Cain invented the club and clubbed his brother to dead it is a no brainer Abel is dead his blood cries out from death dust history brutal is infested with curse murder for countless violent years! Inspired by the poem 'The Hostile Brothers', by the poet Heinrich Heine. Dedicated to the poet Henrich Heine.

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P3 Murder 101: A Crime Scene At The First Recorded Murder how did Cain murder Abel we drew a Bible blank no juicy details weapons spears swords daggers guns had not been invented yet did Cain smash Abel's head in with a stone strike him with a stick?

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P2 Murder 101: A Crime Scene At The First Recorded Murder spotlight Genesis brother hate anger jealousy brother killing brother while out in a field together Cain rises up against Abel smites him dead why did Cain murder Abel because Cain was evil Abel was righteous? a terrible Biblical Historical stage is set murder killing innocent blood!

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P1 Murder 101: A Crime Scene At The First Recorded Murder read the blood guilt murder in the Cain killed Abel genesis stories the killing is wounded jealousy over who has their God's favour not jealousy over who has a beloved lusted for woman's favour with a twist of fermented apple juice mixed into a simmering stew!

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Terry Craddock 14 December 2016

'Yonder, on the mountain summit, Lies the castle wrapped in night; In the valley gleam the sparkles Struck from clashing swords in fight. Brothers they who thus in fury Fierce encounter hand to hand; Say, what cause could make a brother 'Gainst a brother turn his brand? ' loved the fairytale start, guessed correctly the fly in the ointment, hope she was worth fighting over, always wondered why some women desire to be fought over?

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