The Hospital Window Comments

A great poem. A brave correction of mis-perception. MM

A wonderful tribute to his father and to the isolation and grief of the death of a parent.

Higher and higher he lies! ! Thanks for sharing.

In hope to take him back to home, your poem can be interpreted in many ways as you leave the hospital leaving your father and trying to catch up with the world so busy and full with life, running on fast lanes to reach where only they know, for you the world revolves around the hospital window where your ailing father is struggling to survive another day.

brilliant poetry here.this poem paints a clear image in the readers mind.