Thursday, August 27, 2009

.the Horrors Of The Weak. Comments

Rating: 2.5

Through the clenched teeth
you sink in with this,
belief that you're stronger than me.
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Elizabeth Tyease Collins
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Lizz Posio 29 October 2010

Very lovely. It shows true to what you think and the depths of your mind. :)

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Allan O 09 December 2009

I see by the user ratings on this writing that those who read it don't get it...sorry...I think it was wonderful...a touch of the darkside is always welcome to my reading...most people it seems do not understand our style...they see lollypop poems and sunshine everyday as the only way to read and write..i disagree...i would rather read something slightly tainted or fully enveloped into the darkness most of the time...I give this one a 10++...thanks Liz and feel free to read some of my older poetry and such...I have alot of dark poetry..... ~^..^

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Elizabeth Tyease Collins

Elizabeth Tyease Collins

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