I drift into this coma like state,
Fighting the inevitable, It's getting late,
My eyes give one last blink,
I fall deeper in the the realm of sleep,
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Fantastic. Memories always reform in our sleep for that is when we are defenseless enough to not be able to block them. Nightmares are truly memories that haunt us, I can relate to the scares, they attack me constanly.
Really like this, i really know what your saying. The nightmares have been coming for me for years. A great write.
This is well written although I would change the last line to read: If only good memories would last. OR I wish only good memories would last. Read mine - Memory is a Cheating Thing - Adeline