Saturday, September 13, 2008

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a fluttering feeling passes through her
the light creeps away
the darkness seeps in
a beauty forgotten
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Bob Sujdak
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Brittany graviet 14 September 2008

oh wow! very nice, very nice. very depressing but beautifully put! i love how you described the darkness over taking her/him? I was a little confused by the fact that you started out with a girl and ended up with a boy though.

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