Tuesday, November 24, 2009

The Horrible Scene Comments

Rating: 3.7

On their deaths lies 46 dreadful tales
From their blood emerged boiling ire of revenge
Eyes on fire, multiple grinding teeth of tigers
Hearts ripped apart from their lost of kin
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Allan O 01 December 2009

this is not poetry..this is sadness at it's peak...all over the world innocent people are dying for reasons that make no sense...those who do these things say they have this right..they are the chosen one's...they ar nothing...cowards who use others to do their dreadful dealings...yet the one's in charge hide themselves like the vermon they are...but they can not hide from the Lord....enjoy your victory on earth my vermon souls...for in the end it is you that shall pay the tolls.... bless you Catrina....great meanings...~^..^ 10+++++

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Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 27 November 2009

very dreadful act...................may their souls rest in peace.....

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 November 2009

Where is the love? Where is the fear of God? Where is brotherhood? Where is justice? they have to find love first to attain all these... Why the greed for power? ....really a horrible act....monsters, demons in their hearts.....hope they will have a change of hearts... Let the good ones rule the land.... ....crispy write...strong.....an expression of hurt and anguish...which we all feel... 10++++ Maia

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Afzal Shauq 27 November 2009

We are begging......please be God fearing, those who are rulling! We don't want these scenes, we don't want sufferings.....please stop slaying! ! I think the same condition and situation is all around the world but in defferent way...I agree with your idea..politicians are caused for this...we select them and they hurt our feelings...so we should feel guilty too...10/10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 27 November 2009

Perhaps this is happening all over the world in different forms......a good write....

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Kesav Easwaran 25 November 2009

I share your concerns share your rage...share your grief and your prayers Cathy...good write...sentimental effective...10

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Melvin Banggollay 25 November 2009

The criminals must have been decendants of satan They must be happy that many lives perished in their hands they deserved not even a breath if I have the power to show them the fruit of their greed for money and power.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 25 November 2009

I join in your prayers to the Almighty to prevent such horrible crimes in future.

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Ency Bearis 25 November 2009

A horrible thing happened there..I saw it in the news by TFC.......tsk, tsk, tsk Sure my prayer to them....

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Sandra Martyres 25 November 2009

A gory scene expressed in exquisite poetry....This is so sad indeed Catrina...let us pray for their departed souls..there is little else that we can do.

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Lady Grace 24 November 2009

my goshhhhhhhh...we have similar topics as dedications for the innocents dear....thanks also for sharing....u know, this place is only 3 hours ride from ours...and i was so shock upon knowing this coz i have many friends living there..well, the fact is we really know that there are people who cant be contented by other's management so...maybe thats the reason why it happened..so cruel but we can't do nothing except to offer a prayer for their souls... you expressed nicely the truths for a good poetry dear..this is nicely done...hope ur fine...lav uuuuuuuuuuu...mmmuahhhhhhhhhhhhhh.....ingatz...

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Eyan Desir 24 November 2009

First I will like to say sorry about the debate.... I think poems are interpreted differently by different people... Sorry, I got it wrong... About this poem the wording is excellent great flow... wow I will keep reading, I have total respect for you and your work.... hoping mine could be as beautiful as yours thank you....

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Carol Gall 24 November 2009

i pray for them and every innocent preye upon by evil rulers 10

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