The Horizon Comments

Asma, a very sad picture painted here indeed, but if one wants something bad enough, with God's help they will always find a way. Excellent poem Asma. --Melvina--

emotions are beautifully woven. very tight structure. Reuben.

Asma, this is what I call a vety well and intelligently crafted poem. I love how you structured it, though its sad: (. Keep trying, maybe time and obstructions will get tired keeping the two of you apart. Preets