Thursday, June 21, 2012

The Hope Of Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

A disturbed and agitated day takes me away from my happy self
I struggle to hold on to grounds as time gradually gnaws and cuts through every thing that I hold dear.
Restless I watch with envy the trees standing tall
Its branches swaying in raging storm
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Savita Tyagi
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Anil Kumar Panda 27 March 2020

A beautiful poem about the journey of life. No one knows where and how and when the end will come. We can only wish. Enjoyed the poem thoroughly. Thanks for sharing.10++++

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Akhtar Jawad 17 May 2015

We all, if truly living, are hopeful and optimistic for the spring you dreamed.

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Spiritual Seeker 21 July 2012

Simply beautiful how nature and seasons are reflected to life journey.....looking forward to read more of your poems! A great 10.

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Kasia Fedyk 05 July 2012

Yet again you take us on a journey so profound, every time I read your poetry as if time stood still and I find myself in this Universal completeness. I love it, It is beautiful! ! Thank you Savita! :)

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 21 June 2012

Well written poem with meaningful words.

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