Saturday, August 8, 2020

The Hope I Prefer, The Despair I Impair Comments

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I scooped hoops of hope in my hand
By volition took a stand
In spite of struggles I fought
To bring despair and its flare to nought.
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John Sensele
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Deluke Muwanigwa 08 August 2020

Beautiful poem. I love the alliteration and rhyme scheme and for a novice like me its clear. Mulishani bakalamba. Thats the most Bemba i ca n muster. Lived in Kitwe Chimwemwe 1973 to 1977 hiding from Ian Smits regime

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