The Hooked Fisherman Comments

I was reading this and thinking of the times when I've sat in the sun and made myself comfortable. Out comes the wine and sandwiches. Then Oh Lor! I face the inconvenience of having a bite. I don't know why, but when I reached the end of this poem, I had an uncontrollable urge to laugh. Gotta go now :) Excuse me a moment look there goes my lure

A sublime take on the fisherman's hook! Creative wording and impressive diction. Pls do review my latest poem too.