The Honey Pot Comments

Seems taken from real life experience as the flow and depth are wonderful. Yeah, a break up leaves a long lasting scar in the mind and heart. Liked it.

This is so good! I realize it must be a genuine experience in your life which is vexed. You refer to disappointments; memories and disillusions and clinging to nothing. But this experience is so wayward, exciting, a real trip outside yourself, it is completely absorbing. But - It's not just a poem to excite my imagination. It's a slice of your life, an assessment of your real experience, and I hope writing it increases your strength and patience. You deserve a big turn in the path of life toward sheer happiness.

A wonderful shade. Thanks