The Honey And Ak47 Celebration Comments
The gathering by the road side began
The congregants had not expected
That they would be served or serve the honey brew
For it had been a long day full of chores for them
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Weapons will never bring us peace! Thanks for sharing.
This is a window into your society. Your viewpoint is as refreshing as honey brew, being open to both sides: you don't one-sidedly deplore the actions of either police or party-goers. Whatever happens is emerges from deep social conditions, and that is the level on which it changes, so what would be the point of political correctness that deplores one side only?
The poem was very balanced showing both sides without a bias by the poet was clearly well penned.i liked it
I like the way you created a scenario of happiness to consume some traditional brew before police messed up plans. Good piece
When will we ever overcome police brutality? a well penned sorry state.Thanks Poetess.
At times the state is put to test when proper procedures aren't followed
Freedom of expression and congregation should be upheld i like their determination to keep going despite the brutal act
Yes, at times its good to hold on even when brutality is part of the journey
Poor them, they should have sought a permit but that was a sad disperse. Thanks for sharing
Definitely dear, when things aren't done in order things can get murky
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7/28/2025 2:04:32 AM # 1.0.0
This poem reminds me of my past military life before I turned to humanitarian work! I like it.
Interesting Kissa, hard to link both professions to the poem.I appreciate your comment.