The Honest Slave Comments

It seems that we are always slaves to something. So much of our lives revolve around pleasing others. Before retirement, I had at least five supervisors. I did my did my best to satisfy their foolish demands and just stay away from them. But alas, even slaves can be somewhat happy. Be blessed dear poet.

Indeed that's what our lives are. Daily struggles of life encompassed artfully in this gem of a piece. No less than 10.

You have made a difference, a superb creation. A very nicely crafted social poem describing the class struggle and the huge differences 10+++++ Alina

You made me an ant small To carry fifty times loads, With your large heart, words. A very nicely crafted social poem describing the class struggle and the huge differences Well done Sir. 10++ Rani

You made me an ant small To carry fifty times loads, With your large heart, words. A very nicely crafted social poem describing the class struggle and the huge differences Well done Sir.

A beautifully crafted write and powerful poem. It captures the relationship between an employer and employee and the wide gap between the rich and the poor...10