Thursday, May 10, 2012

The Homeless Comments

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A white sheet of paper blows off in the wind,
And slips by a face as blank as the paper,
Where has he gone?
What happened to his life?
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Joe Foster 10 May 2012

heartfelt. I like it. You can read some of mine if you want. I'd like the feedback so I can improve.

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