Friday, September 21, 2007

The Homeless Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was not an ordinary dawn
And the pregnant sky delivered
A feeble infant Sun painfully.
In a street corner the city of Los Angeles downtown
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Alison Cassidy 24 September 2007

Nimal you write with such compassion and originality. Your poems continue to amaze me. 'The pregnant sky delivered a feeble infant sun painfully' is a unique and singular description which introduces your sad Karmic story. Excellent piece. love, Allie xxxx

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Sandra Fowler 21 September 2007

How sad to think that many do not have food, clothing or shelter. You are right to feel grateful for kindness, for that is one of life's greatest gifts. Excellent write, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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