Wednesday, May 7, 2014

The Homecoming Comments

Rating: 4.8

A formless gas keeps rising
Beyond my senses of normality
Assuring me of its existence,
Its gray despair
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Briony Nicholls
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 07 May 2014

Beautifully written with a great flow.

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