Wednesday, August 29, 2012

The Holy Innocents Comments

Rating: 4.8

'I want love, or death, ' just like Mathilda said to Leon
So I'll go and put my Chanel Rouge on,
'We're gonna hit the streets tonight', I ought
And kissed a boy without a second thought
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Sylva Portoian 28 December 2012

Every stanza climb steps... To show the mentality Of male and female In the lost space... Wonderful... I repeat... wonderful I' m amazed... How you can synchronize phrases Giving it lovable taste...! ! !

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Sally Plumb Plumb 02 November 2012

Very enjoyable and very modern piece of writing.

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Mark Dillon 12 September 2012

you have a lively enthusiasm in your writing.enjoye it thanks.

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