The Holy Hymn Comments

Wow, some beauty in these lines.

I enjoyed this write. Thank you.

Excellent piece, thank you for sharing

There is no wrong in the poem or in the story according to me and my understanding of the poem. The is all about the praising and admiring of the universal God rather than the sectarian God in which some people may find some fault as they love to divide the divine God according to their sectarian needs to satisfy their whims or the poem might not suit the atheist -the people of anti-God, but I find the a super one, really really a holy hymn and very suitable for every one, thanks.

i like the idea, still, some thing about the poem/story seems wrong.................

Beautiful! ! Thankyou. Regards...Sharon.

abdul wahab, Please tell us what do you want from the God? God, Himself would have shocked, after having read your poem. Any way, well written..Good..

expresses great commitment and purity of intent.. good work!

beautiful poem but i don't like this peice (the poet of the poets) Words of God are not poetry

A great combination of archaic & modern words...fantastic Poem indeed a holy hymn...hands off to u God bless u...

Praise unto thee Honour unto thee. Guide me the right Give me the light... nice one n i admire contents, , lead me kindly to lights...10

Dear paisano, What hymn it is! You we praise this in our poems but you praised none other than the god in this poem. I wonder how you created these ethereal line from the nub of your heart. It is devotional and shows supreme power at its best! So all the best say your buddy...... Thumps up with a loud cheer!

A heartfelt poem full of personal passion, A wonderful prayer Thank you for sharing it with us Thank you for your generous comments about my poem You made me Smile

Great poem...and powerful too.....

wow! ! ! what a nice poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

From the heart and full of wisdom. Nice poem thanks Abdul

..powerful words..i am sure the Gods must be happy reading ur poem..

A very good depiction of the Lord, something many need to understand. Well done!

A holy hymn is really holy. please go through my poems. with best wishes ramesh rai rkrai100@gmail.com

this is a hymn for the whole man kind