Wednesday, May 14, 2014

The Holy Hermit Comments

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There once was a holy hermit, who
Serenely victorious,
Emerges from his wilderness, and declares:
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Briony Nicholls
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Dr Antony Theodore 24 May 2017

And to once again find pleasure in pain, wavers in dread Returns to his wilderness Disappeard…. Your poems are very philosophical and make the reader thinking a lot. I read many of your poems. Love your poems.. the hermit, his wilderness, his desire to be again in the world, gets dirtied and disappears…. The conflicts of human mind, the desire to be near God Through abstinance and chastisement and then again the desire to enjoy the pleasures oft he world and disappears. A wonderful theme. It touched me.. thank you dear poet. tony

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Barry Middleton 09 April 2016

He made the correct decision.

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Achill Lad 15 October 2014

That Holy hermit was actually a very wise man. Ha ha. A humourous little piece Briony. Crisp and matter of fact. Well done.

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Colleen Courtney 14 May 2014

Don't blame that little hermit! ! ! Nice little whimsical write!

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