Thursday, September 5, 2013

The Hollow Kingdom Comments

Rating: 4.7

Before my eyes, there once appeared
A fallen temple in the sky
And within this temple lay the once-revered;
The godly and the sanctified.
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Danielle Kieschnick
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Michael Paige 29 November 2013

This poem is fantastic! Such imagery! I love it! Hope to read more of your work soon.

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Khairul Ahsan 14 November 2013

I wonder how I could miss to read this beautiful poem, a semi finalist, earlier! A poem that has emerged from deep and serious thoughts about gods and godliness, mundane earth and earthliness. 'And all the pews sat empty; The altar stood stained and bare, As though the very faith of centuries Had been renounced and slaughtered there.' Such verses cannot emerge without deep meditation.

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Ramesh Rai 24 September 2013

Indeed absolutely beautiful. loved it.

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Leah Ayliffe 05 September 2013

Wow this is absolutely beautiful! ! [3 x.

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