Thursday, October 13, 2005

The Hollow Girl Comments

Rating: 4.5

She, under her
Big smile stows
away
the unhappy memories
...
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Ballerina With Fins
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Melvina Germain 13 October 2015

So sad indeed as this hollow girl wears such a mask. You paint such a clear picture for all to see and heed the words of wisdom.....

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Brian Dorn 28 October 2006

There is nothing hollow about this poem. Deep in fact... but not hollow. Great write! Brian

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Nimal Dunuhinga 19 October 2006

The hollow girl sings a sad song of hidden beauty?

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Uriah Hamilton 19 November 2005

You're hollow now, but fill yourself with mystic beauty! Please be well!

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Jon Lloyd 17 November 2005

I agree with sally - very moving, personal yet universal, as with all great poetry. Jon.

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