Tuesday, June 3, 2008

The Hole In My Heart Comments

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My Family is my life, my heart and my soul but as my father is never
here for us makes me sad.
But it gets worse my grandfather dies! ! !
Why did he had to die
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Arabian Heart 12 June 2008

a loved gone i can relate but never give up on the memory for soon you will be a father a son will need please make more for me to read

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Thanks you all for commenting just make sure you read my poems your friend Compton

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Sabrina Helphrey 10 June 2008

Wow! this piece blowed me away. So much emotion put into this piece. i hope that your hole gets patched up some day. best wishes!

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~ Jon London ~ 09 June 2008

Beautifully written bro....great emotion piece, made me think back..that's for sure.. Thanks for this best to you bro Jon

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Compton Wright

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