Tuesday, July 2, 2019

The Hole Can Tame The Snake Comments

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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Edward Kofi Louis 07 July 2019

Society! ! Between man and woman. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 July 2019

if I was to compose this and introduce the hole it would nbe like this hole is womans sole and is the snake guarded by the desired fruit you know tis apllle slight it into u will get seeds containing x and y sperms unseen snake feeds then into tthe hole thru mans now called pole and after a long wait of 9 months hole opens up and a flower comes HOPE YOU WILL ENJOY the unison of HOLE SNAKE AND APPLES TWO LOVING TESTICLES FULL OF ENERGY READY TO BURST AND QUENCH HUMAN THIRST

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 July 2019

Absolutely brilliant! Well penned my friend.............................10

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Kostas Lagos 02 July 2019

Brilliant my friend!

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