You were the path of my darkness fallen lonliness
By the ignited lamp of love inside me,
I travelled within her soul
Eyes absorbed eveything outside me
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This is very long, but you were able to keep my attention the entire poem. Great writing.
This poems brings the reader to feel the supreme heights of your love. It is very well written; the images of nature are very well harmonizing with the feelings described. High level poetry. Very well done.
History of love in allegorical representations of imageries, sweet alliterations and very wonderfully woven fine cut poetry.Great write..
This is lovely, lively fantastic song sung for our fellow poet Vipins. With each poem of his, he creeping towards the list of best poets of 21 century, if my observation is not wrong! Thank for sharing your poem with us, a, ye- a noble poet!