Sunday, May 27, 2007

The History Of Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let me tell you a story, an ancient tale,
In a vivid tone, so ever real,
By the will of man, the curtain unveils,
Strutting his time upon the stage, so unreal.
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Melvina Germain 17 June 2007

I enjoyed the read tremendously, its the sound of power, how man evolves over the years. Shows the darkness in the way he treats those from other lands and then finding the error of his ways allowing the light to shine through. He stands tall in-keeping hold of his power but has found a better way of handling situations, no wars necessay to solve ones differences. He holds the key to success and shines within it. Gaining a vast knowledge and spreading it all over the world, progress takes it's course, while all enemies are kept in place. That's the way I see it. Excellent poem Alex.--Melvina--

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