The Hills Are Alive! Comments
Swooping on gradients and hairpin bends
When the sun sinks and softly descends
At a mellow pace in Heaven's wide arch
A thousand pines in the clouds' arms
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Hi Yasmeen, Right from childhood, I used to wonder, why earth is not a single expanse of plain land-with all the greenery -trees shrubs and all. But, my mother had explained, it is like our life: this moment you are happy, next, you may not. So there are hills, valleys, troughs and big deep oceans and very high mountains on earth. I could not understand the meaning of what she said then; nor do I claim to know now. But your poem explains it.. Great work. Lovely poem. Congrats.
a beautiful poem dear poetess. you have mastered English. the words and expressions u use are beyond comparison. they are very very poetical....... please write more simply for the sake of your lovely ideas and the language........ i really enjoyed reading you. tony
But the life high above swings and thrives, The hills are alive! The hills are alive! A very beautiful poem describing the importance of trees as base of life.Wonderful I enjoyed it alot Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Congratulations for poem of the day. A sweet fragrance realises the existence.10/10
A beautiful poem and a well deserved selection for poem of the day. Congratulations and thanks for sharing such a lovely poem.
Wonderful poem with beautiful imagery. When we are able to submerge ourselves in the beauty of nature, hills and vales all become alive.
............beautifully written......yes even the earth is alive....and congratulations on member poem of the day....this write is well deserving.....truly enjoyed...
And yor poem comes alive with imagery in a marvelous presentation like a great poetess! .So nice to read u again.
As like the hills the poem is alive thru the whole poem pleasure to read indeed...regards
Looking down from the misty mountains, the view described is heavenly and is able to transport the readers to a magic realm where sweet aromas float in the evening breeze and soft gales come to kiss the flowers! This is great poetry Jasmeen! Thoroughly enjoyed!
your artistic talent as intensity and imagination with rich tunes of language you composed a piece of gem/ bravo it's so sweet
when the sun goes down the fairies come out to play. love fairy tales
Lovely place, lovely description, it feels like walking in that beautiful place.
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When I traverse poetry verse across the universe I come across rarely but poetry like this verse it's needless to say as lovely as mom and mom earth Lady poet teacher teach me judge some of mine if you could TIME is a premium we ll know but a blessing coming from you will glow as your poetry like the Niagara does flow now we all know lovely natuaral poet are thee like me hopefully But i compose only FREESTYLE as to delve in other themes i shy and after reading me many have changed their stance moderna poems now they post in advance reading me perhaps by chance Life is one long romance like a river we flow ere off we go! Some day one day if not today another day they say unknown still remain n we may