The Hill Comments

I think this hill is the lesson of human life; human can learn from this hill the gravity in mentality, the calmness in mind, the liberal mood in heart from the hill as well as all parts of nature; beautiful poetic writing; pleasurable to read all

'trust your nerves— in conversation or in bed the rhythm comes.' - Well, more often than not, it's true!

I say: be done with it. I say: you've got to love that hill. Be wrathful, be impatient that you are not on the hill. Do not forgive yourself or other, though charity is all very well.....this poem is very interesting about the hill and human mentality or character;

normative hill, Do not muse on it from a distance: it's not remote for the view only, it's for sport of climbing. A profound poem. Congratulations

What the hill demands is a man with forces flowering as from the crevices of rocks and rough surfaces wild flowers a very good poem. congrats for becoming POD

Eerily enlightening poem about death and dying and a great poetic achievement in conveying this to the readers. : -)

Congrats poet. 10. .

CONGRATULATIONS Modern POD.

Not to be missed! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

In decent death you flow into another kind of time which is the hill you always thought you knew. An interesting poem that compares different aspects of life with the climbing up a hill. Every uphill task can be made to look simpler.

A profound poem raising basic questions of survival and existence. Well deserved modern poem of the Day.

And once you begin hang on for life. What is survival? What is existence? philosophical expressions. tony

A beautiful poem on life and death involving the baggage and the tribulations in between. Thanks for sharing this philosophical treat.

Nice imagery in your poem........8