Sunday, February 28, 2016

The Hill Comments

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obviously it was named
from the ant's viewpoint

to me it's just a teacup
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Barry Middleton
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Valsa George 08 March 2016

You have dealt with the theme in an interesting and unique way! The ants' death or life is in your hands! For them you are the God! Their passionate appeal and prayers have pleased and softened your heart that you grant them one more day to live! Their 'pyramid' is left intact and no apocalypse for the time being! Enjoyed reading!

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Abderrahmane Dakir 08 March 2016

Great poem about the ants'the ants fall on six knees'.I really enjoyed with it.Thank you for sharing.

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