The Hidden Love-Suicide Comments

Good writing my friend. It should never be the last option. But yet more times then not it is. And sometimes it angers us to the it is so hard to forgive. Abandon by those who you love. A absence from the god above. Reason upon reasons. Try rationalize the irrational. Their is no right answer for such a cancer. No matter what you do it still happens. Second guessing yourself doesn't do much but make you feel as if you follow. A trend in the water we must dilute. A final dictation read aloud as if we should proud. The devout shun all on their belief. They won't allow a proper burial for the family and loved one to grieve. Religion above death. What a mess.

nice poem.....i like it.........i enjoyed it really.......keep it up

Dear student, There is no last option till we die naturally or accidentally. Suicide is not the hidden love as far as I am concerned. Try your best in any field till you breathe last.38 lines you have written. Lines are emotion-packed ones. Best wishes! I am a voracious reader of the dictionary, Wren and Martin's Grammar, Times of India newspaper to collect new words, use of new idioms and the sentence patterns etc. being young, you try to write free verse, modern poems, conveying a message or idea in a few lines. Thanks for calling.

brilliantly penned down. i like the expanse of the reasons. a nice write.

Very touching poem! ! Well-write! !

true realistic poem.

Really nice poem that is full of emotions and its every word touches our heart. This stanza shows your sorrow that is universal- These line always remind every person, And then every one says that he was the one, The person gives up the life, By tourcher knife,