... The Hidden Eyes... Comments

Gazing towards the open sky Still awaiting someone would come and try To quench his thirst and comfort his cry But none could alter the game of destiny And so another pair of innocent eyes turned down. innocent children who died in Tsunami.......their final cries, hope in the midst of hopelessness.......... such terrible misery of death... all these are reflected in your poem..... a wonderful poem. thank yo u dear poet. tony

Great to find someone dedicating such a good piece of work to those who rarely get anything... true - they are rejected, dejected and neglected waiting to be cuddled, to be held!

Will those questions in his Universal eyes come to an end? Artistic piece of work.

A poet with a purpose you are i guess...such a well penned poem..a perfect tribute to the souls long gone. Keep it up...

Real gem of a artistic piece :) with an ironical name! ! ! ! loved it! !

when i look at stars the nights tells me do not look at because stars have a naked laugh

Brilliant epitaph.A commendable effort.So thoughtful of you to have choosen such a topic.Its poetry with purpose.A fitting tribute to all thouse who met an unfortunate end in the clutches of tsunami.

What a touching poem! Now angels in heaven. Beautiful write; D

Gazing towards the open sky Still awaiting someone would come and try To quench his thirst and comfort his cry But none could alter the game of destiny And so another pair of innocent eyes turned down. emotive and well written lines... gd choice of words plays at a nice clip.....easy on the tongue.... well done cheers

a lovely theme..really enjoyed it much..well done

great sketch ' written in powerfull manner descrbibng it greatly

those innocent eyes hidden in the sand! ! ! very nice.

...real tribute...with such a vibrant melancholy. ...nice piece of work...with brilliant crafting. Thanks 10+

so sweet and heart touching poem is this one..enjoyed it alot...lovely 10/10+++

oh, this is a heartfelt poem. very mature and sincere. i loved the honesty. good that you take up such issues in ur poetry. would like to read more of you. thank you.

A very sincere and heartfelt tribute to the aweful tragedy.

tHE Tsunamy made a decoy to them..... Gazing towards the open sky Still awaiting someone would come and try To quench his thirst and comfort his cry But none could alter the game of destiny

Really...what a tribute given...hats off to it..... 'To quench his thirst and comfort his cry...' the best line of the poem... A deserving 10 poem with such a good vocab used and a lot of phrases and excellent use of the words at their appropriate position...