Monday, February 29, 2016

The Hidden Comments

Rating: 5.0

Carried in,
in the dead of night,
like some smuggler's load.
Lights dimmed, the curtains drawn:
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Dr Antony Theodore 08 February 2020

They gave all, and should be honored. But what we do not see, we cannot mourn. They are secreted away, as if in shame. Who do they protect when hidden? grief expressed in a very touching way. love this poem. tony

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Chinedu Dike 06 February 2017

I believe that mourning falling heroes of war secretly is not only devastating to their families, but also a show of ingratitude to their patriotic service to the nation. An insightful poem nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Barry Middleton 29 February 2016

To answer your final question, the hiding protects the politicians, the ones who always start the wars but never fight in them. You poem is excellent - a 10 +++

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Cd Sinex 29 February 2016

Thank for your comment.

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Juan Olivarez 29 February 2016

Truly a shame. wonderful piece of work.

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Cd Sinex 01 March 2016

Thank you for reading and commenting

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C.D. Sinex

C.D. Sinex

Philadelphia, PA
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