Tuesday, May 24, 2005

The Hex Comments

Rating: 3.5

The night before I left the moon had gone,
it was as if raw forces of my past
had now combined to rip and tear the mask
off my pale face, and thus expose a ling'ring guilt.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mary Nagy 24 May 2005

Wow, that's such a vivid poem. Great one. Sincerely, Mary

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 24 May 2005

Nice one Herbert.Liked the first stanza.THank you.

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