Thursday, December 17, 2015

The Heiress Comments

Rating: 5.0

I looked at her as she at me.
I blushed alone and looked away.
For a second there the world was still;
That stagnant flair for the moment's thrill.
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Thabani Khumalo
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Denis Mair 15 January 2020

I have returned to this poem several times. Your trepidation gives you insight into your own motives; your shyness pays tribute to regal femininity. She made you feel cleansing fear and saw the human side of godliness. This is an encounter of innocence with innocence, transcending the social gulf.

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Adolf Baloyi 23 June 2017

Thanks Thobani for sharing this with us. Nice poem.

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Phumla Khanyile 13 January 2016

You sure can tell a story in lines and stanzas...i like!

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 December 2015

Nice work with the muse of love and life. Thanks for sharing.

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Thabani Khumalo 17 December 2015

thank you. now, can you please rate me a 10

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