Saturday, August 15, 2015

The Heaven Lost Forever Comments

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A flood of tears blurred my vision;
As I stood; my hands resounding in unison
calling the messengers of heaven....
Our token of love on banana leaves...
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Jaishree Nair
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Madathil Rajendran Nair 28 August 2015

What a poignant write and what an obituary to a much loved father! May God be with him and you all the bereaved all the time. My heart-felt condolences, Jaishree-ji. (10) .

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Valsa George 25 August 2015

A poem pregnant with filial love and saddened by thoughts of the loss of your father! Yes, parents' death leave a void that is not easy to be bridged! We believe that they look from above and send their benedictions on us! Still we continue to pray for their souls. Great write!

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Amitava Sur 22 August 2015

A poignant and intense write about losing the peace of life through death. This poem says about how sequentially the peace of a family gets broken through death.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 15 August 2015

Truly, parents are heaven for children.Loss of father was filled by Mother but absence of mother, there's none who can take her place.

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 August 2015

Very nice. The loss is unbearable. Loved it.

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Vipins Puthooran 15 August 2015

loss is a wound takes much time to heal / poignant writing! !

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