Sunday, June 11, 2006

The Heaven Columns Comments

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Here is coffee, cream, sugar and my sunflower mug.
I stir it gently, tinkling as I go.
My hair is piled up high, unkempt,
like a fine stack of hay, secured by invisible pins.
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Tara Teeling
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R H 11 June 2006

Tara, this is packed with wonderful images of the rituals that define our day - you have given the ordinary an extraordinary feel. The fascination with the 'Heaven Columns' was woven in beautifully. A wonderful poem. Kind regards, Justine

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