Thursday, June 23, 2011

The Heat Of The Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

Suddenly thunder erupts and screams
at the startled figures, who scurry for shelter
as the spots of rain begin to softly sprinkle,
changing swiftly to a waterfall of water
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Composed well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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