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The Heat Goes On Comments

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The Heat Goes On

it's light outside
not from the moon
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2022

Dear Poet CN Premkumar, thank you so much for your attentive and great support. We have both in common our love for the painting section

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C N Premkumar 28 August 2022

Those overheated roads, on which the skies dance in their own reflection. Beautiful imagination..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2022

I said to myself, there is a small error in this poem, The word 'kong' must become 'long'. In the third stnza, please. Thank you for your attention.

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C N Premkumar 28 August 2022

You can edit any of your poems.

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