Monday, March 20, 2017

The Heart Shaped Nest Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fell down several times,
but learned at last,
how to fly.
The joy of learning flying
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 10 April 2017

Leaving the nest is painful.....! Yet, to explore the wider world and enjoy its charms, one has to leave the comfort of the nest! Beautiful poem!

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Bri Edwards 31 March 2017

A cutsie picture. now back to the poem. second line....missing a letter. i do the same at times. no points taken off.........this time! ! ! :) ======================================== nibs? i'm guessing it means beaks. i either guessed 'wrong' OR i failed to find the definition! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Definition of nibs : an important or self-important person —usually used in the phrases his nibs or her nibs as if a title of honor Origin and Etymology of nibs origin unknown First Known Use: circa 1821 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i'm liking the poem so far. though its situated on the bank of a river, ...........it's i'm feeling Garden of Eden? ? ? though its situated on the bank of a river, ...it's and we are afraid we may loose our new love.......lose..... i used to get those mixed up! lose and loose, until ................................................i started using loose goose to remind me of the difference! ;) :) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i see no 'topic' listed. i thought PH always asked for one these days. i'd guess: life, love, adventure, family, maturing, learning, .......anything else? i enjoyed this fantasy (?) . i can enjoy it while taking it literally, but i'd guess it is meant to be symbolic of a human condition. :) how DO they manage to make a nest THAT shape? ! to MyPoemList. if it were shorter, OR i could shorten it, i'd want it for April's showcase. bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2017

Love of mother bird teaches the art of learning. Falling down several times does not become obstacle for learning.Joy of learning the art of flying enriches little birds from inside. Flying and going to a new garden amazes mind with thinking flower as moon and leaves as stars. Views of mountains initiate life in mind's artistic mood in this imagery. An interesting poem very well crafted is shared...10

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 March 2017

Beautiful poem with wonderful message... When you'll turn out your young ones from this nest, you will realize why we turned you out. Beautiful picture of nature painted with evergreen words. Loved reading it.

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