Friday, January 27, 2017

The Heart Of The Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

Getting ready for the breakthrough,
The fateful eclosion from the ragged skin
I unfold my weather-beaten wings
Once more and for the last time,
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Rod M.Peters
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Sandra Feldman 23 July 2017

A very poetic and extraordinary way of Breaking Free. Beautifully set and executed.

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Rod Mendieta 24 July 2017

Thanks Sandra. When I wrote it I was happy with this one. Now I'm sure I would do it quite differently. But I suppose that's the case with most of the poems we put down to paper, right?

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