The Heart Of The Jungle Comments

A fabulous poem replete with imagery

Obina You took me directly to a thick forest. Good write Rgds Nooruddeen

'The Heart of the Jungle' Oh My God ! ! ! ! it was an imaginative piece , but for me , I was almost there with your poem . Thought I was actually having a beautiful journey . Never been to a jungle , but this journey to the jungle was mesmerising . Thanks for it .

Has really good imagery! i liked it a lot

very good and well written, good wording

thank you for the journey..

I can hear the gentle breeze rustle the foliage, I can smell the undergrowth and and see a flash of red and green is it a parrot. Very good I am there and experiencing.10

This is realy good poem.

very nice. you bring pictures with your words.

I enjoy the structure of the stanzas. The rhythm draws your audience in.

What a lovely poem. Reading it makes me feel like I am right in the heart of the jungle you were describing. Keep it up, my friend. Thanks for sharing it with me.

great use of words to picturise the jungle in just words itself... keep it up..

beautiful imagery! thanks for sharing. liked it.

I like this keep writing

A wonderful poem! Nothing is better than mother nature for meditation and inspiration... Hope u can have a look at my poems too!

this was beautiful thank you for the invite for this.

Absolutely wonderful imagery. Beautiful poem indeed!

I loved the passion that this poem sends out. Passion is what makes writing good and this poem is very good.

the way you describe 'jungle' was just perfect. I thought of the jungle as a weird place to be in but i guess you're poem just changed my mid and perspective. great work.: ] thanks for telling me about this.: D read my poems to if you have time. and please do leave a comment. -Glennish M. Gemperoa Phils. Cebu City

hey this was a good one.