Sunday, December 21, 2008

The Heart Of Me. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stumbling wordward, I try hard to express
In inadequate phrasing this happiness.

Overwhelming my senses, unspeakably strong.
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Fay Slimm
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ngaio beck 31 December 2008

Love for one who knows what love is.Good wishes and a lovely write.

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Karen Clements 21 December 2008

This is a beautiful sonnet of an amazing emotional quality. A definite 10 Fay xx

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Sandra Fowler 21 December 2008

Like a wonderful imperishable valentine. Merry Christimas to you too, my dear friend. Love, SandraX

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 21 December 2008

It's beautiful, Fay....10

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Sid John Gardner. 21 December 2008

Love is timeless, knows no boundaries, and lives for all time. Thanks for sharing this one Fay, Sid xxx

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Kris Smith 21 December 2008

Beautiful words fay hould imagine he would be overwhelmed 10 +++ Chris

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Fiona Davidson 21 December 2008

Such a beautiful song Fay...thank you for sharing it with us...Fi

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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