Everyone has a heart
they give us life
they beat in our chests
and are as strong as a knife
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Commentary on the heart. Good way to use your observations to write a good poem. But I agrre with Jenny Sar, I like the Ones better
dear friend your poems are good i prefer the darker side but i still think your a good poet keep it up
I am a heart patient. Your poem is touching to know. Yes, no heart is the same!
Aden I really relate to this poem as I'm imminently facing open-heart thoracic surgery...
GOOD i like ur view on the circle of life..lol... i just thought of the movie lion king..~SMILE~ GOOD POEM!
our physical hearts are not the same but the same our souls remain as they incarnate again to pass new tests until all tests are passed