Thursday, June 26, 2008

The Heart Game Comments

Rating: 5.0

So there's this girl,
And she kinda has my heart.
She simply stole it,
And promised to never break it apart.
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Osvaldo Govea
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Sathyanarayana M V S 18 September 2008

I wonder, this exchange of hearts business is very well there in West too. There are hundreds of lyrics in our Indian cinema expressing same thoughts. Oh! Whole world thinkis the same way; especially in love matters....I too wrote GUILLOTINE, ATONEMENT etc. on this subject/concept. Very nice read. Your expressions have the needed mellowed flow for this kind of poem...very good.....10

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Tanya Stanford 26 August 2008

Aah this one is really sad. Sadly once the trust is gone, she might never give it back to you.

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