. The Heart Comments

Good description of the heart. Thought you could have brought something in about a transplanted heart. Karin Anderson

Colored with love......A river with love....Weaken by time.......Stopped in sands of death! ...yes...it stops...as that is the rule of life....but your poems show, your battery is running very well...10+...as I loved your thought process...Brishti...

every aspect of the heart there in this poem

beautiful poem.... nicely done., keep up

Beautiful write indeed with nice flow. Crafted very well.

A very hearty story indeed....Now your next project: The Brain... Cheers. Subroto

Very Insightfull for every day life

A very splendid poem depicting all aspects of a heart including the functionality, the feelings and the emotions. The poem has ingrained in it the real happenings a heart deals with in daily life.....10/10

A lot of insight and very inspiring. your idea of the heart is captured very gracefully and composed into a poem beautifully.

Captures the essence of the heart's ways

what a beautifully insightful and sinpiring piece. you display great affections within your words and a Godly love which is superb.

yuo're a very religious person.. continue holding up with God! heheh :) and always keep up sharing the talent He has given you..

Full of fire and emotion- what we come to expect from you E-man! Thanks for the invite. J. L.

Excellent use of many meaningful words – well done thank you

BEAUTIFUL POEM! GREAT IMAGERY!

Expressive, powerful imageries, literally poetic. Great write.10.

great job on this poem

nice writting... Great job

no comment! ! you have done a goooood job!

i think this is the best description of the heart i have ever read Ashleymarie