Thursday, July 9, 2015

The Headlong Fall Of Hope! Comments

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The dazzling smiles which hovered on your lips
made me think, I were in your beauteous heart.
To build the fort of love, you gave me some tips
but to fulfill that dream, I failed in that art.
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Rajendran Muthiah
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Valsa George 30 July 2015

Drinking philter keeps one for ever in the pink. A sip of desire whacks the ship of love to sink.......... Interesting lines! Do you mean to say that falling in love is like falling into a trap! Those who have once failed in love, carry the scar all through life! Quite sad! ...... Beautifully put!

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Madurai District, Tamil Nadu, India.
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