Friday, April 21, 2006

The Hawk (Haiku) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sharp talons, sharp eye:
Soaring hunter in the sky.
Somewhere a mouse hides.
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Gary Bryson
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Sylvia Spencer 03 May 2006

Just a great piece of work wrapped up in such a small parcel it says everything cheers Sylvie

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Sonny Rainshine 21 April 2006

Very nice. Some haiku that people write don't quite work. This one 'soars.'

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Sandra Fowler 21 April 2006

Elegant and spare. You have captured the essence of the hawk in a very few words. Regards, Sandra

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