Sharp talons, sharp eye:
Soaring hunter in the sky.
Somewhere a mouse hides.
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Very nice. Some haiku that people write don't quite work. This one 'soars.'
Elegant and spare. You have captured the essence of the hawk in a very few words. Regards, Sandra
Just a great piece of work wrapped up in such a small parcel it says everything cheers Sylvie