The Hawk Comments
The hawk glides
above the massive hill,
alone but not lonely,
small shepherd of the great sky,
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I wouldn't say elegant. I'd say the imagery is not cold...More fierce. And there is a sense of awe I really like in your words. It's a wonderful poem Max! X's and O's
Max, your descriptives in here are grand..This is an elegant poem.~~~~marci.~~
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8/24/2025 4:31:03 PM # 1.0.0
This is the essence of a mighty hawk...and a poem in its own right. Lovely, parred down work, Max. Raynette