Monday, September 14, 2020

The Hauntings And Concerns Of Dead Poets And Poetesses Comments

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I broke a poetry golden rule trying,
Hard to make this poem read fine.
I should have carried the word trying,
To the beginning of the second line.
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Shaun Cronick
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Dominic Windram 15 September 2020

Yes Shaun the ghosts of dead poets and poetesses weigh down heavily upon us as we write our words. I think this is a highly original poem and your rhyming scheme is fine. It's certainly a haunting and a taunting ten from me!

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